There is no great writing, only great rewriting. ~ Justice Louis Brandeis
I realized earlier today that the last magazine article I submitted had been rewritten at least twenty times.
It started out as a 500-word newspaper column, printed almost nine years ago, when I was a total newbie to writing and absolutely terrified of what people were going to think about what I had to say.
When I re-read it last week, I could feel all of that old, perfectionistic tension oozing out between the words. Though I still love and value the idea that sparked the piece, reading it again so many years later was almost painful. It really wasn’t good, at all (despite the fact that hours and hours and at least a dozen revisions must’ve gone into that draft, and an editor found it print-worthy).
The piece I submitted to the magazine barely resembles that first article. I almost completely rewrote it, keeping just one whole original sentence and half of another one. It’s now more insightful, but less rambling. It flows easily with a more personal voice, instead of the choppy “just the facts, ma’am” flavor of the original.
At a writer’s conference years ago, I was advised to edit the stories I’ve already written and submit them anew. So, I’m taking that advice and doing that now. It only took me the better part of a decade to take the leap, but I’m finally at a place in life where I’ve gathered enough confidence to give it a go. I figure, “Why not? What’s the worst anyone can do? Mark it up in red pen and send it back?”
Hey, let them do that. Then I’ll learn something to make it better, and I’ll rewrite it.
Blue Man Group is on its first U.S. theatrical tour, and Broadway in Atlanta has brought them here! Trust me — you don’t want to miss this!
It’s a little hard to explain what you’re in for. Toss together percussive techno music, special effects, a load of laughter and some crowd interaction and you’ll get an idea of what the show is like.
My son Eli and I got to go the opening performance tonight and we both agree — Blue Man Group is something you have to see live at least once.
Of course, as we were walking out of the theater, we were talking about the next time we see them. So I’m pretty sure this isn’t the last time we’ll partake of their brand of wonderfully wacky weirdness.
The video below gives you a little taste of what we enjoyed tonight:
I think our favorite part was near the end, when they released the giant balloons into the audience. Eli got to bounce one, but it fell just beyond the reach of my fingertips. Dangit!
Blue Man Group is a delightful dash of craziness in a world that takes itself far too seriously. Showing at the Fabulous Fox Theatre in Atlanta now through April 12th, the time to catch this amazing performance is short.
This recipe, scribbled onto an envelope, fell out of a community cookbook that belonged to my grandmother.
It’s so poignant to see her handwriting again. We called her Honey, and I miss her sweetness every single day. She taught me most of what I know about cooking. Even so, I can’t quite figure this one out.
Mysteriously titled “Candy”, I’ll copy it here since the picture is a bit hard to read:
2 c. brown sugar
1 c. white sugar
3/4 c. dark Karo sirup
1/2 c. hot water
2 egg whites
1 teaspoon vanilla
1 c. chopped nuts
Mix sugar, Karo sirup, water and salt. Cook until it forms hard ball in cold water.
Well, at least Honey told us it was candy! LOL
At first I thought, divinity? But whoever heard of divinity made of brown sugar and dark Karo syrup?
Then I thought pralines, but there’s no butter. And I don’t think pralines contain eggs, do they?
I tried typing the ingredients into Google, but nothing came up.
Can anyone help me figure out what this is? And what in the world is done with the egg whites and nuts?
Thanks for leaving a comment if you have any ideas for me.
If you have any Star Wars fans in the house, there’s something new in Atlanta to check out. Legoland Discovery Center has unveiled a new Star Wars Episode 1 Miniland exhibit and it’s quite impressive. With special light and fog effects and interactive displays, it really captures the spirit of the films and draws fans into the experience.
We were invited to attend the display’s opening last weekend, and it just so happened to coincide with my son Eli’s 13th birthday. His love of all things Lego and Star Wars goes back to toddlerhood. When he was six, he wrote a letter to Carrie Fisher (he had a major crush on Princess Leia) and she sent this autographed photo back to him.
So you can see — the love goes back a long, long time!
I don’t know which experience thrilled Eli more: receiving Princess Leia’s autograph, or hugging Darth Vader on his actual birthday.
Probably hugging ol’ Darth….
As you can see, there were several costumed characters milling about and interacting with the crowd.
Eli also enjoyed an opportunity to help build a giant Darth Vader Lego figure.
We will have to go back and see their finished work, as the display runs through the end of 2015.
I found these photos in a box tonight. They were taken almost exactly 12 years ago, at Fort Stewart, Ga.
Donnie’s Army National Guard unit had been activated for deployment. For eleven weeks, we spent our weeks apart, then on weekends, drove four hours back and forth between our home and this base. Donnie had to stay there while we waited to hear when he’d be leaving for Iraq.
For eleven weekends, we said our “final” goodbyes, thinking it would be the last time we’d see each other for a year.
Needless to say, it was brutal on all of us.
I love these pictures of my precious guys, but they also make my stomach hurt a little, even today. Because I can’t forget how I was feeling when I took them.
It sure is hard to believe this sweet baby becomes a teenager in a few days.
He sure was a pretty baby. (He’s going to hate that I said that!)